when you scream.
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I'm probably going to draw or paint soemthing for this in the next year or so, the theme inspired me so much! (Kyrie, if you ever see this...ignore it and move on.)Critiques
Is my language clear? What do you see happening? Is the situation clear? Would it still be clear if the description "You're so cute when you scream" wasn't there, or would it be too ambiguous? What do you think is the "sunless throne?"Is there anything that can be fixed, rearranged, cut, etc? What would you rate this on a scale of 1-10?
Do not worry about being "too harsh," I love all critiques.